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desperately needs editing
The story is pretty good, but the book needs the help of a professional editor. The authors contradict themselves repeatedly, sometime within the same paragraph, paragraphs have sentence after sentence that seem to have no relation to the one before, and things are repeated in multiple places. I highly recommend against starting this book unless it has been substantially revised.
