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★☆☆☆☆
So irritating to try to read such poor writing and punctuation
I have to agree with other one star reviewers. I gave up about half way through and deleted it from Kindle. Just too irritating to continue. The point of view kept jumping around for no logical reason. The main character was a total a$$ and I just wanted to reach through the pages and slap him silly. The grammar and punctuation was at grade school level and made my head want to explode. And the saddest part was that this sounded and seemed to be a pretty good, gory serial killer mystery. With some tremendous editing and rewriting, I think the author might have had a good book, but as it stands now, I would rather poke pins in my eyes than continue reading. It was just that painful.
June 2015 · Kindle Store · verified purchase