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★★☆☆☆
Poorly written & edited
I liked "Ghost Detective" for an interesting and clever plot, so I tried this effort by the same author. Unfortunately, this suffers from poor writing, bad editing, hackneyed plot devices and more. Sorry, but I cannot recommend it at all. First, the editing looks more like a single pass from a spell-check rather than a genuine edit. "Their" used instead of "they're", gender pronouns mis-assigned, tense errors and the like pop up throughout. Minor plot devices show up and then seemingly are forgotten, left unresolved. At the end of the book, the author seems to have written the protagonist into a corner, and has to assign an esoteric skill to allow the hero's escape. Then the author has to go back a hundred pages and insert a single phrase referring to this odd skill with no other explanation or reference, kind of an afterthought resolution. This feels like something knocked out over a weekend with little or no review or rewriting. By the way, "Ghost Detective" had many of these same flaws to a lesser degree, but it was premised on a very clever concept which the author made work in spite of the minor glitches.
May 2014 · Kindle Store · verified purchase
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The Gray and Guilty Sea: An Oregon Coast Mystery (Garrison Gage Series Book 1)
4.3★ · 18,679 ratings, as of 2023
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