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★★☆☆☆
Undeveloped and crude
The heroine lusts after every man she sees and uses crude language excessively. She is not likeable so one doesn't really care what happens to her. The book is filled with role playing vampires and homosexuals. The love interest has no personality other than his looks. In fact all the characters have no personality except their physical descriptions. The murder is icky and the reason for its commission is unbelievable. The solution is typical and the grammar needs work. Yet it moves at a steady pace and if you don't mind these flaws, I guess it's okay.
May 2016 · Kindle Store · verified purchase