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I just can't finish this book. Someone ( her editor) should tell Ms. Ware that not every noun needs an adjective and not every verb needs an adverb. Also, how many times does she need to tell us the protagonist has a headache and hasn't gotten enough sleep? I couldn't stand it any longer and put the book down. There are too many good and entertaining books out there to waste time on a poorly written novel like this.