Bests & Worsts Reviews from Amazon

I was surprised to see all the good reviews for this story. It's a reasonably cute story, as popcorn romances go, but it really could have used at least one more editing pass. Not only are there a large numbers of typos, but more than a few plot or character inconsistencies. First the main character's friend/employee is living with the main character because she doesn't have a place of her own and sometimes stays with her boyfriend, then the friend is kicking the boyfriend out of her place so the main character can stay with her. The main character learns immediately that the guy's worst enemy is his cousin, then later seems shocked to learn they don't get along. Things like this are all over the place. Not to mention, the main guy is portrayed at first as a cool, emotionless player who has two girlfriends at once, but from the moment he meets the main (female) character, all of that is gone, and that part of his personality never shows itself again, which is both unrealistic and inconsistent. Overall, a pretty disappointing read.